Shan's son's father?
A smoldering glance caught his attention, the vision sitting at the bar was looking HIS way. The gold aura around her brought on by her hair and ears was reflecting g the lights of the bar in such a...
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If it matters to you, then sure, finish it.My only real complaint is that at first it was hard for me to tell that there were two men, it seemed like the drunken jerk and the future father ('he'...was...
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A month later the hospital shrink decided he could go home. The department of human recourses found him a new apartment and he was on disability from the force so that was not much of a concern. His...
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I'm lovin' what I'm readn'!The story line is good. The characters are average. And plot seems to be doing ok.I like it. But if it wouldn't be a bother. Could you consider putting some space between...
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lol sure, and sorry abtou that, and if my sig is screwed up, lol it is cause ia m experimenting
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Awww, they had a spat. Well, they'll make up...be interesting to see how and when. I like how things aren't moving overly fast, but at a more realistic pace.One question (I don't know ablot about...
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it did say :P but yes he had to sign a release becuase he was a attempted suiicide, so yeah he had his choice, hospital or nurse at home Sweetly disturbing new sig
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It had been three months since Shan had moved in. Her constant support and caring was finally making progress. She slept out on the couch in the living room. She cooked, cleaned, always ready with a...
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